YA stuff iv
Ack! Sheila reminds me of my neglected story, while posting part of her own. (Love the "extravaganzas of vulnerability," red.) Figured I'd post a teeny bit more, hopefully kickstarting some work on it:
He sat next to me, as usual. I allowed myself a sidelong glance. The most obvious thing about him--far more evident than his emotions--was that he was truly an atrocious dresser. He had no sense of style whatsoever. He wore gray corduroys, of the kind a ten year old would wear. There was a huge inkstain on one leg, suggestively near the crotch. It was a chilly fall day, but he had on a tee shirt, which was a size too small and emphasized his lack of defined chest muscles. And to top it all off, he'd apparently given himself a haircut, without benefit of a mirror.
The outfit alone was enough to banish him from Kelly's consideration forever, never mind his physique, or his total lack of edge. I winced slightly, replaying her comments about him in my head. But the cool thing about him--apart from his composure in the face of defeat--was his utter lack of self-consciousness. He clearly did not give a damn about his appearance. Not a flicker of a damn.

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I so knew a boy like that in high school. Horrible dresser - but so unselfconscious and - confident - that he was seen as HIGHLY desirable to pretty much everybody. He just flat out did not care. Very attractive!
The model for the character was endearing to a lot of people--highly desirable only to a few.
So I'm fascinated by the roman a clef nature of this. Would it be forward of me to ask for initials?
(Considering out high school, being unselfconsciously scruffy doesn't narrow it down all that much.)
A.W.
Thanks.
Hmm, it would have been nice to know that that was an appealing style back in junior high/high school.
I think two people were attracted to him in his high school career. And neither were the "Kelly" person he set his sights on. So only moderately successful, really.
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