Wednesday, February 01, 2006

YA stuff iv

Ack! Sheila reminds me of my neglected story, while posting part of her own. (Love the "extravaganzas of vulnerability," red.) Figured I'd post a teeny bit more, hopefully kickstarting some work on it:
He sat next to me, as usual. I allowed myself a sidelong glance. The most obvious thing about him--far more evident than his emotions--was that he was truly an atrocious dresser. He had no sense of style whatsoever. He wore gray corduroys, of the kind a ten year old would wear. There was a huge inkstain on one leg, suggestively near the crotch. It was a chilly fall day, but he had on a tee shirt, which was a size too small and emphasized his lack of defined chest muscles. And to top it all off, he'd apparently given himself a haircut, without benefit of a mirror.

The outfit alone was enough to banish him from Kelly's consideration forever, never mind his physique, or his total lack of edge. I winced slightly, replaying her comments about him in my head. But the cool thing about him--apart from his composure in the face of defeat--was his utter lack of self-consciousness. He clearly did not give a damn about his appearance. Not a flicker of a damn.

7 Comments:

Anonymous red said...

I so knew a boy like that in high school. Horrible dresser - but so unselfconscious and - confident - that he was seen as HIGHLY desirable to pretty much everybody. He just flat out did not care. Very attractive!

9:57 AM  
Blogger fortuna said...

The model for the character was endearing to a lot of people--highly desirable only to a few.

10:45 AM  
Anonymous LizardfBreath said...

So I'm fascinated by the roman a clef nature of this. Would it be forward of me to ask for initials?

(Considering out high school, being unselfconsciously scruffy doesn't narrow it down all that much.)

2:22 PM  
Blogger fortuna said...

A.W.

2:25 PM  
Anonymous LizardBreath said...

Thanks.

2:56 PM  
Anonymous eb said...

Hmm, it would have been nice to know that that was an appealing style back in junior high/high school.

8:46 PM  
Blogger fortuna said...

I think two people were attracted to him in his high school career. And neither were the "Kelly" person he set his sights on. So only moderately successful, really.

9:23 AM  

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